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Do They?

Our very existence is the source of our conceit
we go further and further into space
no life

And we
as the most intelligent of the fortunate
have the audacity to question
having given ourselves the right
and the obligation

While the others believe
or don’t
as a matter of fact

Or
are they unconcerned
as we should be

I’ve seen elephants cry
but do they pray?

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  • infinite spirit
    June 25, 2007
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    beautiful words with what seems to be lots and lots of good points. ^_^

  • saintace
    June 23, 2007
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    awesome

    "i've seen elephants cry, but do they pray?" - you come up with things that make me gasp in awe.