Whispers,
her sighs of dreams,
floating across our minds,
dancing gracefully in splendor
Reminiscent, enchanting, loving words
transcend into lucid visions,
as this Angel’s journey gives light
to our earthly purpose
Poetry, from
whispers
Author notes
My dear friend, may you always know, that no matter where you go.. our friendship shall always stay!
xoxoxo
Jazzy
In a list
A contest entry
- Anything At All by Heavenly Angel.
26000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 100 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Linda,
What a sweet dedication to an angel. Great style and form. Loved the line transcend into lucid visions.
Eric
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Thank you!
Hi Eric
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments and applauses!! It is nice to hear you enjoyed this one!!
Thank you
Linda
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That was really good. It had excellent flow. I'm really not that great at giving constructive criticism, because I don't usually find bad in things of beauty. Great job.
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Thank You!!
Hello Kotai
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment on my poem!!
It is very nice to hear your inspiring words!!
Thank you for the smiles
Jasminerose
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great write i love it... good form... beautifully written and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!
Hi Nicole
Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments on my poem!!
So nice to hear you enjoyed this so
Thank you!!!
Linda
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Liked the sentiments expressed so well in this poetic form. Like rictameters and the way they are written.
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Thank you!!
Hello Grannyeri
Such a wonderful comment you have shared about my poem!!!
Thank you somuch for the smiles
Jasminerose
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Sweet Jazzy,
Thank you for a truly beautiful and wonderful piece of poetry
You have such a loving and giving heart of love and you mean the world to me!
Thank you for everything....I love ya!!!!!
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My Dear sweet Angel!!
You are so welcome.... you also mean the world to me and I am so sorry for all that is happening... wish there was something I could do to convince you to stay, I am going to miss you terribly!
I wrote this for you, as your poetry is like sweet dreams coming to light for all of us to love
All my love to you and a whole bunch more my dear friend
Jazzy
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Beautiful
A beautiful poem Linda. The whispers through poetry can mean so much to so many people. and your comment in your notes is never a truer word spoke. True friends never depart and always remain within the heart.
all the best in this contest Brian.
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Thank you!
Oh Brian
Thank you so very much for such a lovely compliment on my poem!
She is a gem and I love her dearly as friendship always stay within your heart!! Being that, that is were this one began from the moment we first met!
Thank you
Linda
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Awe,
This is just enough to let sweet Heavenly Angel know how you feel, and how missed she will be. Loved the form and flow, just beautiful my friend.
Thanks for sharing, peace, and all the best!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo
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Thank you!
Thank you so much Tim for such a beautiful compliment on my poem!
She will be dearly missed by so many
Just thought I would show her a little bit of what is in my heart for her!!
Thanks Tim
Linda
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