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Creative Conclusions

Combing through crazy conundrums
I cry for conclusions,
for chaos to cease
but I cringe and collapse...

Essential surrender
comes creeping like cat burglars,
quietly calm.

Calling up clues
cupped with crude calculations
I cope
by creating complex crap converters

that exchange complacence
and procrastination contrived...

for constructive creations
encompassing change.

A contest entry

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  • Redtearstains
    June 9, 2007

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    AWWW CRAP!! this is really good and I am totally gona be watching out for you in this contest! *Mumbles under breath* Damn competition and stupid opponant with a cool funny poem. Really funny write keep it up!


  • BlackRabbit9x
    June 8, 2007

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    "... creating complex crap converters"

    I mean, that was fresh, unique and original. This is the kind of writing that suggests depth and reality. Good piece, good luck in the contest.


  • Swan song gold member
    June 7, 2007

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    I could barely fisnih reading this poem because the crap converters had me busting up too hard. That was excellent.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 6, 2007

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    "I cope
    by creating complex crap converters"

    omg, lol
    can I get the specs on that?