Sometimes I act crazy.
I may be a little too hyper.
You may think that I act like I need to wear a diaper.
But I'm just being me, me, me.
Sometimes I'm repetitive like that me, me, me up there.
Well, I'm just putting everything down that comes to mind.
I promise I'm not leaving ONE thing out.
You get a view into my twisted mind/head/way of thinking.
Sometimes I use too many slashes.
Guess where they are?
You MUST think this poem is odd.
I see you eyeing that "X" in the upper-right-hand corner.
Sometimes I think I know things that I don't.
Like that last line of the third verse.
I really can't see you at all, promise.
I'm not a stalker.
Sometimes I say I'm not a stalker like that up there.
That's just me being crazy.
I'm crazy most of the time and usually I scare people.
My friends say that I'm insane.
Sometimes I'm insane.
Like that up there.
But lucky for you, I'm laid back when I write.
For now, fortunatly sane.
Author notes
I'm 13. This was different for me to write. I NEVER write about myself, but a few people asked me to. So here it is a piece of writing that is about myself.
(I write things that refer to myself but not clearly saying it. I know I'm a coward...)
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Pick a Title and Roll With it 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
450 points, ended June 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is VERY DIFFERENT for me, so just hang in there.
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
"so a reread i'd prefer"??? Is there something else wrong with it???
-
I think we all need to act crazy at times. I think there is nothing wrong with it either. Sometimes it's just the kind of break we all need to help us relax a little bit is all. Great Write!
Blessings
celticmoon
-
oh my goodness~
you almost made me believe that you were insane~ or really random!
in a good way though, it goes along with the title SPLENDID!
sometimes i'm insane,
like thinking you were.
but after all, she's sane
so a reread i'd prefer
-
Oops! Thanks for pointing that out!
-
I thought this was pretty cool. I can understand acting crazy at times, although I myself am more reserved and quiet, I have my moments. Good poem here, although in the second line of the first stanza you might want to put "I may be...". Just something I noticed. Good luck in this contest. God Bless!
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
