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Can you see me now?

On and on
never to end

On and on
no tunnel with its light

On and on

Blood spills out from me
Insults imbeded in my flesh
Still fresh in my head
Still I live

I exist! I exist!
Here I am!
I exist! I exist!
See me!


On and on
never to end

On and on
no tunnel with its light

On and on

Can you feel my despair
It's like I'm not even there
You treat me like dirt
It's like you don't know it hurts

Your not so great
You know
You make me feel
So low
Done hesitate to bring me down
Its the only reason you come around


Blood spills out from me
Insults imbeded in my flesh
Still fresh in my head
Still I live

I exist! I exist!
Here I am!
I exist! I exist!
See me!

Thats it
I've had enough
I gonna show you how it is
When its just too much
I gonna let you know
You're gonna realize
I'll put the barrel to my head
and let the bullet go
I'll see it in your eyes

On and on
never to end

On and on
no tunnel with its light

On and on

Blood spills out from me
Insults imbeded in my flesh
Still fresh in my head
Still I live

I exist! I exist!
Here I am!
I exist! I exist!
See me!

I'll write my message on the walls
Red against white
You're bound to see it
Lying in the hall
What a sight
You can't believe it

On and on
never to end

On and on
no tunnel with its light

On and on

Blood spills out from me
Insults imbeded in my flesh
Still fresh in my head
Still I live

I exist! I exist!
Here I am!
I exist! I exist!
See me!

On and on

On and on

Can you see me now?

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    June 13, 2007
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    an emotional tidal outpouring. a grand job..relationships are never easy are they ..peter


  • Tavil
    June 7, 2007
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    Great!

    This was something else you really did a great job writing it. *thumbs up*