Animals,
the only thing
that can ever be
adorable in this world.
Climbing trees,
chasing each other,
eating,
Showing off.
Everyone loves animals.
Their survival,
is one of the most important
things in the world.
Have you ever gotten
saved by an animal?
Some lucky people have.
Animals have been used for jobs too.
Helping the blind,
tracking down things,
or finding things.
They are a very important
part of our life.
Has a animal killed boredness
for you?
As an a animal starts following
you around and you throw a ball to
occupy the animal and you.
So you are capable of saying:
" Dot ( your dog) came by and wanted to play ball,
so I threw it for her, and she loved it."
So are you an animal lover?
I am.
The sad thing is,
in the olden days,
People killed animals,
I know it was to surrvive,
but it still just doesn't make much sense.
There used to be panthers in Ohio,
I would have loved it if there still were!
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ It's All about Nature! by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended August 15, 2007, 13 entries
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Very well done and I really like the message to this piece as well. You did a wonderful job!
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Awesome
This is a wonderful poem You write very good for your age. I wish you good luck on the contest i can see you love animals. I realy like your user name too i love pikachu! Great poem keep up all your good work. Maybe i'll look at more of your poems
-maddie
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great poem.i love animals to so it made good sence.
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Very Good
A very good poem. I love animals so much that is why I write about them and especially my pets. -
Wow panthers in Ohio i wo would have ever thought.. {not me for sure} i have gotten wel not really saved by a dog.. once i go locked in a room with a glas door from the other side i pointed the dog to my kitchen to cal for help and he did
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I love it
You are Creative and weird and your sister thinks you are annoying!
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