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[ I seen the cutest thing today ]

I seen the cutest thing today
A guy with a heart warming smile
I looked away and acted casual
But always sneaked a peak

His blonde hair and his blue eyes
His dreamy stare
I seen him wink at me and I just couldn't help it
I waved at him and then started walking

I must have not payed attention
Because right when I turned my head
I was face first into a pole
The mark was aligned on my face

I heard him laughing and I felt like crying
I blushed so much it blended with the pole mark I was hiding
I started running but he took my hand before I could get away
I turned me around and our eyes met

My heart was pounding and My eyes looked down in embarrassment
He took his finger and lifted my chin and kissed me without heitation
My first kiss, I thought, was very enlightening
I met an angel, who loved me the way I was

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  • broken-colours
    June 6, 2007

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    Adorable. Love the story you've told ; it's very sweet. Thanks for your entry & good luck in my contest