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Swim in Sin, Drown in Sorrow

Who swims in sin shall sink in the sorrow,
desecration regret to the morrow.
Indiscretions assumed holding no weight,
shall come full circle in shameful forsake.

Those darkened deeds hidden obscurity,
come to light in accident surety.
Harmful truth outlast scathing lies hidden,
bite from the dog returns in the bidding.

Turn about's fair play, we reap what we sow,
before the sway, a fact you should have known.
Tragic liars must have good memories,
returns in haunting those bent on deceit.

Common respect, seems uncommon in truth,
distortion's glue, rolls off me, sticks to you.

 

                        ~~Suseann~~









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"Who swims in sin shall sink in sorrow"

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  • Redflower562003
    June 6, 2007
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    i like the ending of this it made me laugh


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    I like this, it's got the haunting quality of a third voice. Thanks for entering and good luck! La x