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Got This Feelin'

Love you forever,
Tried to deny it,
Came back to bite me,
Because feelings don't really end,
And once I'm breaking down,
Things just slip out of my mouth,
And before I know it,
I'm telling you that I love you,
And will never stop,
Telling you that I really care,
Tears may be in my eyes,
Stress might be going to my head,
But whatever I said,
I really did mean ever word of it,
Because I wasn't lying,
I was breaking down,
Venting to you was the best and worst,
Thing that could ever happen to me,
But you didn't say you loved me back,
You didn't say a single word,
Didn't you get it?
I stared at you in class,
Wondering 'What if...',
Talking to you ever chance I get,
Trying to be nice, kind, funny,
Anything,
But I found myself stumbling over words,
Making comments that don't come out right,
Doing things with good intentions,
But totally messing them up anyways,
Saying stupid things,
Being all nervous,
I wish I could just relax,
When I'm around you,
When I'm in the same room as you,
But somehow,
I trip over chairs,
Because I wasn't paying attention to anything,
But you and your stupid laugh,
Somehow I don't think this is my fault,
I think that I just fell for you,
The day you attempted to stick up for me,
The day you told me I was kind-of cool,
The day I heard you argue that I was smarter,
The day I laid my eyes on you,
I've got this feelin',
A feelin' that probably won't go away,
And in the mist of a big melt down,
I kind of told you my feelin',
Thought you were going run away,
Scream or laugh or something,
But instead you smiled and said,
'Baby, I've got this feelin',
A feelin' that won't go away...'

Author notes

Um, I wish I could say this was true...

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P.S.
I love you baby.

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  • Ignis Corpus
    June 6, 2007
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    good luck


  • BrokenDawn
    June 6, 2007

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    hey wow i really love this!! God the line'Baby, I've got this feelin',
    A feelin' that won't go away...'
    OMG i love it i mean it is the end and all butit just sorta grabbed me i love it!!
    -emmy
    P.S Can't wait!!

  • Ignis Corpus
    June 6, 2007

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    The day I laid my eyes on you,
    I've got this feelin',
    A feelin' that probably won't go away,
    And in the mist of a big melt down,
    I kind of told you my feelin',
    Thought you were going run away,

    that is what makes me want to cry cause i can realte to that part so much and so true keep this poem you should enter it in my contes

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