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What the Demon Does

Please stop
Oh it burns
Satan back off
My stomach turns

Deep inside
It's bleeding now
To make it stop
I don't know how

Don't touch, beware
The thing that shouldn't be
Crashing to the ground
Underneath of me


Make it stop
Make it numb
Make the feeling
Lame and Dumb

I hate it
I hate you
Looking at me
Wanting me too

I'm left alone
Only ghosts are company
My mind is empty
Yet slightly jumpy

So drowsy now
To sleep I try
I need to escape
As the drugs help me die

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  • Enchantresses Spell
    June 16, 2007

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    I am at a loss for words to try and praise such a piece of art. Deep and thought provoking in it's dark moment. Very impressive.


  • On Frail Wings.
    June 14, 2007
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    wow this was deep good luck in my contest!