Your shadow retreats
since you can no longer stand
Mr. Corpsley
your presence
so needed
has left The Cirque du Freak
and joined
The Cirque du Hell
A contest entry
- Cirque Du Freak by travis34dietC.
300 points, ended June 26, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ok, then leave "Corpsley" if it's symbolic..
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nice vivs! did you read any of the books or just hear me rant about them?
just change "Mr. Corpsley" to "Mr. Crepsley" and this good!
i love the last part: "your presence
so needed
has left The Cirque du Freak
and joined
The Cirque du Hell"
i hope Mr. C went to vampire paradise, not hell but i liked this =]
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Weird, too weird,
Nice and good!
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