I want to feel loved
I want to see the care
I want somewhere to belong
I long for these things in you
I walk through hells fire
As each day slips on by
I'm hated and scorn
But I walk and search away
I long for a need to be me
I long for a touch so pure
I pray for it to be with you
Satan says he wants to play
He says I'm not worthy of any hope
So I've shattered what I had some more
I pray for hope to be rekindled
I pray for desire to cease
I weep that in these dreams you'll help
God has sent punish on my soul
He claims I'm Satan's friend
I try to say I'm not, But maybe I am
I weep all day and bleed all night
I weep for what was lost
I settle knowing maybe you'll show
I've tried to display the love
The love hidden so deep in the forest {of agony}
But it never has {and never will} find its way out
I settle down with out love or a god
I settle without ever knowing
Because you never came to what I asked
Love so unwanted, I try not to care
Love so hated, i'll never dare to look again
Love so bliss at one time, I'll no longer miss
Author notes
wanting needing and settling are the best you can do at times
Option one
A contest entry
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715 points, ended June 21, 2007, 7 entries
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DO NOT REPLY JUST FIX IT!
please put option number in author's notes.
i like the poem and the usage of the devil as "your friend" it fits in well. good job and good luck, but please put option number in author's notes. thank you and again, best of luck to you.
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NICE! i like this, very deep and emotional. Unfortunately, many of us feel like this, like God isn't listening or answering our prayers. Then we turn and piss on him, but when you realy truly think about it, he really IS answering our prayers but in a way that best benefits us in the end. A great write! VERY WELL DONE!
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How true!!!!!! What a great job on this one! and sometimes that is all we can do is settle, don't mean we have to like it, we can strive for more, for better. Best of luck in this contest!
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