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Beyond Space, Beyond Time

Sweetheart,

Beyond Time,
beyond space
our love runs deep.

With a bond that
can never be broken.

No matter the distance
no matter the years
our love runs true.

So many things
I see,
I hear,
I find a memory of you.

An invisible thread
runs from my heart
to yours.

Knotted for eternity,
it stays strong
beyond space,
beyond time.

This-our love
yours and mine
forever.....

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  • penman gold member
    June 9, 2007
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    Excellent

    Oh my such passionate and touching thoughts. Very amazing write.


  • Angels Delight
    June 7, 2007
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    Amazing

    I wish I knew what to say my sweet friend...

    I know how deep that love of yours runs and I know that for you it is very hard to let go...but remember my sweet Nyetta...the love will remain in your heart and soul...

    Thank you for sharing this most precious piece with us my darling friend

    Ek is baie lief vir jou
    Tes

  • Arkbear gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    My Dear Niece ~

    Love pours freely from your soul ~

     

    The Queen of Hearts ~

     

    A Splendid write indeed, with just the

    right amount of emotions to

    keep the Theme from

    collapsing upon itself ~

     

    Sometimes A Poet can push and push their

    feelings on us until we can't take anymore.....

    ...you have used caution....I like that ~

     

    You and Brother Cat show us

    what Love is really all about ~

     

    Thank you for that ~

     

    Uncle Bear ~


  • Morgan Kennedy Nite
    June 6, 2007

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    It's true love, Mom, and this is the defination that you would find under it in the Poetry Dictionary of the World (which I have just recently put together, lol)
    Love, Little One


  • Desire gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    Precious!!

    Oh This is Precious next to the last one and the ones before
    Love the images and spoken from the Heart
    Just Beautiful!!

    LOVE IT!! WOWZERS!!!


    Thank You for sharing this!
    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • DevilDoll
    June 6, 2007

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    i loved that line 'i find a memory of you'.... so beautiful. that thread will never be broken, and will lead you back to his side one day. xx
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