you are my angel
my love
my life
my everything
but you already knew that
i don't care
if we can't be
if we can't long
if we can't love
each other
like we do
what is wrong
with the love we share
with the love we long for
with holding each other in depressing times?
who gives a rip
what everyone else says
i love you
and always will
and will always be there for you
no matter what happens
between us from society
Author notes
I Love You Baby
A contest entry
- The Love For A Girl by Ignis Corpus.
385 points, ended June 10, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh my god!! i cried... I m like in that exact same situation!!!! My family hates the Idea of my girlfriend/best friend! I Can Relate SOOOOOOOO welll! It was amazing!!=)
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Well I loved to read it, short like i asked but enjoyable, i liked it, loved "I don't care
if we cant be
if we cant long
If we cant love
each other
like we do."
also i liked the last lines of the poem good job and good luc
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