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Inspired?

Majestic creature with wings of purest golden hue, you hold
Undiscovered galaxies within the serenity of your gaze.
Seeking out those worthy of the gifts you offer freely, some
Empathic heart to give life to the music of her soul.

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Option 1, Acrostic
I'll leave the light on for you.

A contest entry

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  • Old Fool
    June 11, 2007

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    Hmm, I've never thought along these lines.. more a spiritual way. Yes, I like.. very well thought out, with good imagery describing your muse.. And good floowing lines too.. Yes, definately thumbs up!
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  • Brucie
    June 6, 2007

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    Great

    You took a very interesting approach to this, I'm very impressed. I've always imagined my muse with huge golden wings as well, strange. Well done and thankyou for entering.

    • ChildeOfChaos
      June 6, 2007
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      Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've always thought of my muse as some almost anngelic being with huge golden wings and silver eyes. It's strange, how detailed the picture of her is in my mind. Thanks again for your comment and for the inspiration to pen another piece about my muse.