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Our Spirits

On this rotating sphere,
that we're living on,
it may seem to appear,
that all goodness is gone.

Inside of us all,
our spirit resides.
Whether good or bad,
we each must decide.

We make many choices,
every single day.
Some affect others,
by what we do or say.

Having faith in something
much bigger than we are.
A purpose in life,
will enable us to go far.

Our spirits can transcend,
throughout time and space.
Uniting us with others,
with wonder and grace.

Love is the propellant
that carries us through.
Giving us the strength,
to do what we must do.

Reaching out to others
in their time of need.
Supporting their spirit,
so they can succeed.

Spirituality is a blessing,
that we can all share.
Loving one another
and showing that we care.

On this rotating sphere,
where our bodies are confined,
our spirit is only limited
by imagination and our own mind.

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  • slipperssun gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    WOW WOW WOW... now that is what i call inspiring.. it tells of how life seems and alsoo of how life really is and can be... i really enjoyed the uplifting feeling i got whilst i read this... it flowed really well.. good luck in your contest.
    cheers
    Jen


  • Angels Delight
    June 7, 2007

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    Wow...Amazing...Beautiful

    Oh My Fellow Poet

    You have but captured my heart and took me on a wonderfully spiritual journey...This is what I have been looking for...

    I need food for my spirit and these poems have started to fill that empty hole in my spirit...

    I thank you from the bottom of my heart for entering my contest and wish you only the best of luck

    Much Love
    Tessa


  • Candy6
    June 6, 2007
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    GREAT

    a great rhyme.


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!

    I have made both choices in the past and still will I am sure but as I go on I find a certain peace in this beautiful world around us, I am letting my heart reach out once more like it used to do those many years ago to the wonderful beauty of nature all around me everywhere.


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 6, 2007

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    'Spirituality is a blessing,
    that we can all share.
    Loving one another
    and showing that we care'

    IF this were true then this sphere would live in perfect harmony. The thoughts and sentiments are there, we just need to take our blinders off and open our hearts...to really see and begin to hear! Lovely poem ~Sie

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