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should i forgive you?

you called me last night
and asked for forgiveness
i dont know if i can
all you caused me was hurt and sadness

i have sat and pondered it
ever since your call at midnight
i listened to the voicemail
and cried all night

youve hurt me so much
youve ruined my life
after i think of you
i want to pick up that knife

im tired of fighting
leave me alone
ever since you have come back
my sadness and hurt have shown

you tell me your sorry
but in truth you never have been
you try to regain my trust
so you can beat me over and over again

how can i forgive you
after what you have done
i remember how you hurt me
and threw me up against my home

so should i forgive you
i say no
and my hatred for you
will always show

Author notes

this poem is based on my life with jayin...if you want to know the story IM me

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  • Emo-Thexual
    September 6, 2007

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    Wow....
    This poem really hit me...
    There is just so much emotion in it.
    Beautiful piece of writing.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    This is a very sad write. I know how it feels to be hurt by the one who is susspose to love you. Im sorry for all your pain. My favorites lines are
    im tired of fighting
    leave me alone
    ever since you have come back
    my sadness and hurt have shown

    People dont understand when they hurt us they really hurt us and I for one have a hard time bouncing back from things. Thank you for sharing your poem with me xx


  • LifeEndsNow
    June 8, 2007
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    I liked it great job -Kevin


  • Vars
    June 7, 2007

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    Wow. This is amazing. I wish I could write like this because this is simply amazing. It oozes emotion, and how you can capture so much emotion in a poem shocks me...this is excellent, and above and beyond the rest

  • heartsshadow
    June 6, 2007
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    aww

    this is very emotional.My body shivered when you said beat you over and over again. The pain..I can feel them beckoning of the page as I read it. All I can do is try and understand and try to live with the fact that I can't do much to help you..I'm sry.

    • heartofpainfultears
      June 6, 2007
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      as i have told other people no one can help me...this is something i have to handle on my own

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