Nightingale

My soul sings like a nightingale
Like a free spirit I would like to wander
In the sky ages after ages.

No sorrow won't touch me
My feet will never be on the earth
I would like to take birth as a singing bird
to give my dreams an entire sky to fly
I will never be surrounded with griefs

My wings will give me ecstatic feeling of freedom

I'll live a life of bliss
Singing throughout the winter, summer and spring.

A contest entry

Reincarnation, what and why? by Uckerhead. 419 points, ended June 19, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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blue20bunny
June 27, 2007

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Very Passionate Write
I can totally see you sailing through the sky, like the birds without a care in sight. You have definately spread your emotional wings on this write and soared up high. This is a beautiful write.. Loved it.Thanks for sharing this with me, and I greatly appreciate the comment you left me....thanks
Uckerhead
June 7, 2007

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Please reread the guidelines.
I get the what you would like to be but I do not necessarily get the what you think you would come back as. If they are one and the same I do not get that definitive message here. Enjoyed the piece. Well written and good luck in the contest.
Sabir Abdus Samee
June 7, 2007
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A very good poem.
- Shapla
  June 7, 2007
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  Thanks a lot for taking the pain to read and comment.I'm glad you liked it.
Leaving Today
June 6, 2007
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"Singing throughout the winter, summer and spring."

yeah, free soul can do that. nice thought.
Ignis Corpus
June 6, 2007

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No sorrow won't touch me
My feet will never be on the earth
I would like to take birth as a singing bird

That is my favorite part of the peom, i like it verry much so
- Shapla
  June 6, 2007
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  Thank you so much for reading and taking the pain to comment.