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Emptiness...

How do you tell someone that your slipping back into depression?
How do you explain your whole world colapsin'?

Everyday waking up, trying not to cry,
Everyone asks what's wrong? and all you can do is lie...

A constant battle just getting out of bed,
All day long, stupid shit runs through your head...

Telling yourself "everything happens for a reason",
Maybe it's the weather, maybe it's the season...

Smile, to hide a sad face,
when am I gonna leave this horrid place?...

Life & everything in it, is going wrong,
Faith is on my side, helping me stay strong...

Always thinking life is pointless, why try?
Bottleing up feelings, just want to die...

Oh Lord help set me free,
Before this EMPTINESS consumes all of me...

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  • TheDeadMan
    February 27, 2008
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    nice. very good poetic rhythm. ver good write.


  • whiterabbit.
    June 16, 2007
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    I really like this and can relate to it so much. I have been in that exact place and sometimes I still am...kinda a lot really. I've had days not getting out of bed and random breakdown. Anyway wonderful poem with so much emotion in it. Depression sucks, but this poem doesn't I love it.

  • HeartBreakinSilence
    June 6, 2007
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    great job! really good poem