C-C-Crash into me baby;;
Make it rough.
I crave your vodka kiss;;
give it to me.
Its tasteless..
What happened to us, love?
P a s s i o n is a crime;;
just like m.u.r.d.e.r baby.
&& lucky you,
You've moved up to ##1 on my list.
I hope you saw me last night sweetie;;
I hope you thought of me while
she was (screaming) your god damn name.
Dont shatter at the sight of me;;
Lipstick mixed with tears is the next best thing.
This is what they call a beautiful c-a-t-a-s-t-r-o-p-h-y.
Isnt it oh-so-perfectly cliche baby?
Your star stopped s*h*ining the first night you fucked her.
You should've seen this coming doll;
This is a world of Car Crash Humor && sweet n o t h i n g s
Author notes
Hate or Love
Giving Up On Me
Option 7
♥ dancing on your grave ♥
A contest entry
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"I hope you saw me last night sweetie;;
I hope you thought of me while
she was (screaming) your god damn name."
I have only one thing to say; OUCH!
Interesting take on things, thank you for entering
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this is a sad write, i can tell you try to keep positive yet you want to hide that you're so hurt...great write. it was beautiful
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wow i really love this its awesome. this is probably one of the best dirty pretties i read. i like it a lot. nice write and good luck dear!
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this frickin rocks i love it it just screams amazing doll this rocks you should win this contest.
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oooo wonderful piece...i loved it...very raw and full of emotion...it was a very good dirty pretty piece...i loved the lines
P a s s i o n is a crime;;
just like m.u.r.d.e.r baby.
great job...thanks for entering good luck
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Definately... I love that phrase, "CarCrashHumour" it described dirty pretty well...Taking something not funny and almost making it so, taking something disturbed but making it look beautiful and desirable. I suppose that's life for you. This was powerful... I can relate to this one as well. Dirtyp retty is what I like as I can relate to a lot of it! Thanks for entering.
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this is amazing, i loved it.
good job!!
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Ohh wow baby doll, this is what i mean when i say beautifully tragic!!! most wonerfully done.
good luck and much love kaydee
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me either. wow like this poem is majorly awesome!!!!!!!
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Hm...I dont quite have the words to explain the way this makes me feel. But i love it just the same. The car crash humor and sweet nothings line is hauntingly awesome. It kind of rings in the back of your mind for a while. In a "I'll be there when your heart stops beating, I'll be there when your last breath's taken away. In the dark when there's noone listening. In the times when we both get carried away..." kind of way. It's great.
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