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Inner Weather

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Spin my sphere in wands of grass
annunciating morning's mind to rush
in orange inviting bluer breeze
to whisper motion on my meadow.

I am one inside embrace,
where life within,
is life without,
as flower fluttered dance to drift,

her secret sending soul to serve
through that which is,
and always has been.

I am finger strolling space
in face of now,
as far and near,
breathing in to know your beauty,

and out so you might find me generous.


So walk with me in softer step,
her color laced in ground below us,
barefoot so your feet might translate
hidden poems of blossom's heritage
as treasured little bits of heaven,

in petals pulse of pastel presence,

her scattered stars of earthen light
in pleasure sent to say hello
to glow in love,

my prodigal eyes,

and measure music, as magic muse
meshing word inside of note,

our song in spirit raising sky
to billowed cap
upon my mountain's craggy head
in such to sing as wind in waiting,

through golden petals of peace together,
our lungs to bare,

such inner weather.










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  • tara wilson gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    A beautiful poem...
    "So walk with me in softer step,
    her color laced in ground below us,
    barefoot so your feet might translate
    hidden poems of blossom's heritage
    as treasured little bits of heaven,"
    Loved this part, Mr. Mountain!


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    "I am one inside embrace,
    where life within,
    is life without,
    as flower fluttered dance to drift"

    Yes, you are. Gorgeous, my Friend. Good luck in the contest, Scribe. Wanda


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    such a song to sing of beauty found in soul and light to gather in subtle chimes in spirit's splendor.


  • Angels Delight
    June 6, 2007

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    Stunning

    First of all let me just comment on the picture...It is gorgeous...It suited the poem so beautifully

    Now on the write it captured me and took me on a very nice journey to a different time and place...My happy place if I can call it that...So in other words what I am trying to say is well done on such an incredible poem

    Good luck to you in the contest and thank you once again for entering

    Much Love
    Tessa