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Oval (Lyrics)

Just down the street
In all her grace
A sunny day
I saw her face

She smiled back
I turned away
The clouds returned
The skies turned grey

[pre-chorus]
Anxiety,
Fills over me,
And I can barely stand.

I can’t seem,
To stop this dream,
I sink into the sand.

[Chorus]
How will I get through this?
How will I ever last?
I can’t save the future
While dwelling in the past.

Darkened skies surround me
I feel you’re far too late
As moonlight hits the ocean
I’m buried with this fate
[End Chorus]

Into the wall,
What she engraved
I will always
Return enslaved

Captivated
By frozen lies
Even though I
See through the guise

[pre-chorus]
Anxiety,
Fills over me,
And I can barely stand.

I can’t seem,
To stop this dream,
I sink into the sand.

[Chorus]
How will I get through this?
How will I ever last?
I can’t save the future
While dwelling in the past.

Darkened skies surround me
I feel you’re far too late
As moonlight hits the ocean
I’m buried with this fate
[End Chorus]

I’m Paralyzed
I’m Paralyzed
My heart races
I’m Paralyzed

Sinking deeper
Sinking deeper
Suffocating
Sinking deeper

[Chorus]
How will I get through this?
How will I ever last?
I can’t save the future
While dwelling in the past.

Darkened skies surround me
I feel you’re far too late
As moonlight hits the ocean
I’m buried with this fate
[End Chorus]

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  • leopardleaf
    July 25, 2007

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    WoW!

    i agree with child of grace,"Darkened skies surround me
    I feel you’re far too late
    As moonlight hits the ocean
    I’m buried with this fate" is a great part! I apsolutly loved it! "I can’t save the future
    While dwelling in the past.' Had great meaning, very good very good!

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  • child of grace
    July 18, 2007

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    "Darkened skies surround me
    I feel you’re far too late
    As moonlight hits the ocean
    I’m buried with this fate"

    I loved this!
    a wonderful song, Im happy to have stumbled upon it!
    s

  • MayDecemberSun
    June 29, 2007
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    At first I thought you had a typo: "Anxiety, FILLS over me, And I can barely stand." But then, even before I read on, I thought, geez, great twist--means being buried alive. And of course then I read on. Truly dwelling on the past, or in it, is like being buried alive. Great lyric.

  • Soten-Jaganshi
    June 28, 2007
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    "
    How will I get through this?
    How will I ever last?
    I can’t save the future
    While dwelling in the past.

    Darkened skies surround me
    I feel you’re far too late
    As moonlight hits the ocean
    I’m buried with this fate
    "
    that has to be like.... the most kickass chorus I've heard in a long time. I relate so much. good write (i'll add more later)
    Sote
  • xeroabyss
    June 7, 2007

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    i like this

    this is a really good song.my fav part of it is i cant save the future while dwelling in the past. good write

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