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Freedom to Choose

What you put in your body
no business of mine

I live with my choices
You have to live with your choices
no business of mine

what you take out of your body
no business of mine

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  • twilight seduction
    October 23, 2007

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    I love the use of "no business of mine." You know, this could apply to several otehr things than abortion, good poet. It can apply to just sex, to drugs, to implants in the body done medically...what a versatile poem! Good title, says what you mean, and tells the reader your aim in the poem.


  • Naridill gold member
    June 7, 2007

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    I agree, this poem is very reasonable, short but powerful and very well put. Thanks for entry.