What you put in your body
no business of mine
I live with my choices
You have to live with your choices
no business of mine
what you take out of your body
no business of mine
A contest entry
- Quickie. Prompt / Picture inspired. by Naridill.
300 points, ended June 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abortion--Pro-choice by twilight seduction.
450 points, ended November 10, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the use of "no business of mine." You know, this could apply to several otehr things than abortion, good poet. It can apply to just sex, to drugs, to implants in the body done medically...what a versatile poem! Good title, says what you mean, and tells the reader your aim in the poem.
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I agree, this poem is very reasonable, short but powerful and very well put. Thanks for entry.


