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Winning Taste

You know the thickness of forest
density of the greenery
and movement of wild animals
You wake your selves up to make us sleep soundless

The enemy is an eye sore
The ego of him is not at all  rare
Patience is your virtue
Perseverance is your fort

We bow before you
oh! soldier brother! we hail you for the winning taste

Author notes

SOLDIER SAVES US IN STREAMS OF WAR FEARS

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 6, 2007

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    Short but sweet! Thanks a lot for entering
    this poem into my contest. I appreciate it and
    wish you the best of luck with it here. Keep up
    the great work and thanks for sharing it!



    Jeremy0826