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A Thank you Note

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What thinking eyes that you have got,
What brain, My God, What senses?
I am wondering, full of joy n bliss,
While reading your comments,
On one of my the favorite poem,
“A song about myself”
Written by John Keats,
How very sweet,
The world would be,
If all the people,
In the world,
Make use of the sense as thee,
I love you for your words N thought,
I love your theme of song,
I feel, as I am a naughty boy,
With you, I feel, I am strong.

Author notes

This poem is a thank you note to my dearest friend on oldpoetry site for her comments on one of my very favorite poem.
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/49320-John-Keats-A-Song-About-Myself

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Comments

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  • Saree Wynter
    July 19, 2007
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    This was good I loved how faithfull you were in the poem. Great Write


  • line shakes
    June 12, 2007
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    lovely piece, ahkam. i love you.

  • yassmin
    June 10, 2007
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    nice write

  • rhondasail
    June 6, 2007
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    A very heartfelt thanks indeed and appreciated in kind. Peace to you...Rhonda


  • lake of whispers
    June 6, 2007
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    lovely!!

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