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Wasted Love.(Quadraphor)

An empty vessel
once full of summers fine wine,
now cracked and broken
from dissipated passions.

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seven syllables
five syllables
seven syllables

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  • sheltered
    June 20, 2007
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    Intoxicating

  • monkus
    June 18, 2007
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    absolutely splendid, but how can you waste love?:-)


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 18, 2007
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    Exquisitely penned.


  • PinkChef
    June 8, 2007
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    OOh very poignant! I love the imagery. Definitely, and incredible write!


  • shuvi
    June 7, 2007

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    this is EXCELLENT! a brilliant metaphor.. totally literally ridiculously awesome!! one of the best ever on the subject.. luved it..!! keep the pen rolling, shuvi


  • n e m o
    June 6, 2007
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    with just i little bit of hope, the vessel will be full and fixed again.

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