You know you are having a good day when
Paths of your destiny come to your feet
When hopeful words do whisper in your ears
And a lamp is lit in your heart.
When you are flying without wings
And witness the change of the worst things
And in your ears a heavenly voice rings
That life has accepted your invitation and offerings
You feel that you are having a good day with the joy it brings.
A contest entry
- You Know You Are Having A Good Day When... by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended June 10, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful... With all the thought and spirituality you include. You have mentioned some of the things that are highly essential for gaining happiness. Keep it up..
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
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Wow
I am impressed by your poem here. The poet below who commented makes a good point as well. any ways extremely unique poem this here and I really like how you penned this poem. any ways very interesting posting you have here but a good one at that. best of luck in the contest -
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Glad it could attract your attention.
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That's really a true description of a good day. I think a good day is something that has to be perfect and this is the reason we don't really find it! Liked your poem, well done.
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You are right. We search for the perfect day that can really never be found because nothing not even a day can reach the state of perfection. Shukria for commenting honey.
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