She lives in the shadows
and fears all light.
She's sweet and enjoys the night.
You rarely see her during the day,
But you might see her anyway.
Her favorite flower
is the red rose,
And at night she really glows.
Some call her the Shadow Angel,
and we all wonder why.
Some call her a Demon Angel,
but that's something we can deny.
She really is the Shadow Angel,
and we can all understand.
She's the sweetest Shadow Angel,
and anything she can withstand.
The Shadow Angel is rarely seen.
You'll be lucky to catch her.
She's about sixteen,
and her favorite holiday?
Halloween.
The Shadow Angel has the most wonderful wings.
Some claimed to have seen her fly.
Her voice is beautiful when she sings.
She loves to cry,
if she ever has a need.
I've spoken of the Shadow Angel,
and told you what I know.
We've walked and talked,
and she really does glow.
I can't tell you her name,
for that would a shame.
You see, the Shadow Angel made a vow,
that she would show me how,
to keep her secrets.
Her secrets are hard to keep,
but I've done well.
She wouldn't dare tell her secrets,
for they hold the greatest danger you'll tell.
She knows some things
that humans were never meant to know.
Quite frankly it stings
to have this burden to stow
away in your mind.
The Shadow Angel is my friend.
And her secrets are mine as well.
To backstab a Shadow Angel...
That's the last thing you'll comprehend.
I'm sticking with the Angel to the very end.
One sad, dark, and gloomy day she'll ascend,
and I'll see her in the end.
Author notes
Ok...just because my name is ShadowAngel73 does NOT mean that this poem is about me. I don't like to write poems about myself.
Anyway...this is something that just came out of my head...I wrote this for the fun of it!
Enjoy!
Please tell me what you think
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WOW. okay i was TOTALLY not expecting that from you but impressed you came up with it none the less. KK is right. there a few lines that dont exactly add up but it doesnt take away from the poem in its entirity. Nice jp
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ok...i've read it over and over and over and I still can't find the lines that don't fit! tell me what they are!!!!!! (please)
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Hey this was pretty cool! There were just a few lines that didn't exactly fit with the whole product, but I'll let you figure out which lines those are and if you want to change them! This was pretty sweet though
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It's nice
But, a word of caution...sometimes the rhyme messed the whole meaning up. I was told this once, maybe it can help you. Sometimes we must drop the rhyme, to carry the flow.
good write though!
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I loved it. Very vivid imagery, and intriguing at the same time. Beautifully written, I really love the rhyme scheme too - not too typical. It flowed really well. Keep writing! xoxo
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thanks so much! i think its one of my best ones! I really appreciate the comment!
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