life without you,
is like a worl without sun.
life would be a desert for me,
if you go away from me.
life without you,
is like a child without mother.
your,my life and i would die without you.
life to lead without u would be ,
so much depressing n lonely,
dear never leave me alone.
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to All Poetry !
This is a very heartfelt write about someone you obviously love very much. Very nice imagery and some very good metaphors as well
'like a world without sun'
'a desert for me'
Keep writing, reading and commenting!
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Gaylene
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