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Heart

You are my heart
You are my whole
You’re the only person
I want in this world

I wish you could know
What affect you have on me
And my life
You’re changing me even when we aren’t together

You are trying to
Save me from my life
That has gone down hill
Since I was little

I want to thank you
For always looking out
For me and my fat ass
We both love you for it.

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  • Forget Regret
    October 13, 2007

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    Ok Then..

    Interesting write little one..especially the part about your fat ass.. although the way you spelt it you are talking about a donkey.. which i know for a fact you dont own.. lol... but it is a good write.. very deep.. love kinky


  • LovemeNHateme
    October 10, 2007
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    wow

    good poem!!!!!!


  • Apsinthion
    September 19, 2007
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    this is really sweet..
    very nice write babe..

    ~rana~




  • Melodies
    August 10, 2007
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    Smiling and hugging you, lil Sis! Your poems always make me glad I came to see you!

  • Melodies
    July 27, 2007

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    This poem was not written for me either but what the heck I love you, too. And the poem is really good and I love it. YES!

    Your big SIS Melodies


  • jstrauch
    June 7, 2007
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    hmm i dont think its to me lol but it dont matter if it isnt cause i still love you

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