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My mind

My mind is a running
My heart is a racing
My head is a swimming

I wish I could just
Stay in your arms
For all of time

You keep me happy
You keep me sane
You keep me safe

I wish you and I
Could be together
Forever and never part

I know I’m not a male
I know I can’t get you pregnant
I know I can’t father a child

I hate not being with you
I hate not seeing you
I hate not touching you

You mean the world to me
You make me smile
You make me go crazy

I would never hurt you
Or tell you a lie
Or even make you cry

If I have then I’m sorry
Because you are to special to me
To make you cry

I wish time would stand still
And my feelings let lose
So you can see

You have this affect on me
One no one else has
Even when we are asleep

All I can think of
All I can breath
Is you and your name

Take my heart
For I give it to you
And never let it go

I want you to keep it
And always love it
Because it will always love you

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  • Forget Regret
    October 13, 2007

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    Very Nice.

    I like this one.. James does too.. It's very deep and quite well written.. well done little one.. love Kinky


  • Apsinthion
    September 19, 2007
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    "Take my heart
    For I give it to you
    And never let it go

    I want you to keep it
    And always love it
    Because it will always love you"

    i really like this.. i jst love the way u pour out ur feelings in your poems..

    luv ya babe!

    ~rana~




  • Melodies
    July 27, 2007
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    Awww... lil Sis... What a beautiful poem!

    I do hope whomever you love appreciates what a loving heart you have You are the dearest person and I think this poem is so lovely and filled with the most BESTEST images and thoughts.

    Your big sis Melodies who loves you!


  • ELmo LuVZu 4eVA
    June 6, 2007

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    nice write darl n i know u aint been able to write in a while so this ust have been a relief but yeh i like this poem its relli good n i can see how u express these feelings too i mean yeh but yeh nice write n ill c u at skool