When the colors of the trees
in autumn after it rains
has the sunlight shining through.
As the morning comes
the green grass has drops of clear blue
water from the dew.
What if we could make bubble with them .
I wish I had a wand.
after it rains, Did you ever see a rainbow
in a puddle because of oil in the water.
what if we could make bubbles with it.
I wish I had a wand.
A contest entry
- You against the world. by Ember Rose.
600 points, ended June 8, 2007, 15 entries
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cool
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I have always kind of liked those rainbows in the puddles.
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Ah, the simple beauties and pleasures of life and nature, nicely written soft and smooth with good visualization...Scott
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