you lie to me to get your way
you never listen to a word I say
you beg me to take you back
but I tell you you'd better pack
you sting my heart with aweful lies
you walk away and say goodbye
you hide yourself from the world
and think of me as a little girl
you whisper words that are so sick
you only think with your little dick
you never have the time or day
to listen to a damn word I say
so, see this as your last farewell
pack your stuff cause you're headed for hell
don't say you're sorry.........save your lies
I'll just sit here and hide my cries
you lied to me too many times
and still you thought that things were fine
well, I guess it's not okay
to listen to the words you have to say
you're just a liar and a dirty cheat
you only used me for a piece of meat
I trusted you but I was your whore
you wanted sex and nothing more
you have your secrets and you have your life
you'll live it fine without me as your wife
and I'll live mine just happy as can be
because for once I'd be set free
you said you loved me but it was all a lie
you said you cared but you watched me cry
I thought that we'd be together as one
but now we're through.....now we're done
you lie to me to get your way
you never listen to a word I say
you beg me to take you back
but I tell you you'd better pack
you sting my heart with aweful lies
you walk away and say goodbye
you hide yourself from the world
and think of me as a little girl
you whisper words that are so sick
you only think with your little dick
you never have the time or day
to listen to a damn word I say
so, see this as your last farewell
pack your stuff cause you're headed for hell
don't say you're sorry.........save your lies
I'll just sit here and hide my cries
Please tell me what you think
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very good
well, first impression
"you" have quite a few issues
i could have written the same to my ex
a few of them no less
i'm going thru some stuff now
they lied, manipulated, very deceitgul
but
you got to move on
if this piece helps you do that
hooray for you
something that turns me off is your reference to size, as in little
i mean, this is 2007
the world is so pass that
it's a childish taunt, so it takes away from the work
if it were way big, would you forego his bad personality, lies, character defects, etc?
i can realte to the lies, ignoring you, cheating, etc
i feel you could have expressed the ideas more with thru denotation
i like the two sides to every story thing
but
of course, this is not the forum for that
the repewtion at the end means you are serious, angry, this is it
good for you
"you lie to me to get your way
you never listen to a word I say
you beg me to take you back
but I tell you you'd better pack"
hey, this not new, it's been played out since adam and eve
and probably right now around the world
but
it is important in its own way for you to express it
either way, great read
i am a bit taken aback by the anger
i usually pen funny, nature, family, etc type of poems
so
a title?
"movin' on and not lookin' back"
you go, girl
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I think the title should be, "Closed Doors, Closed Ears, Closed Minded" or "Walk, Don't Talk".
Oh, and whoever this dude is, I'll happily beat him for you. -
Wow, deep emotional poem. I am thinking of "A Lovers Betrayel" for the title.
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wow, very intense. wish I could have writen somthing this good to the peice of crap I dated
excellent emotional write, I cant think of a name, but the ones that Celestial1 sugested sound great. once again, great write -
Perhaps something like 'Liberation from You'...and for some reason 'A Beautiful Release' keeps popping up in my mind. Anyway, good luck with the title search. Very raw emotion in this, reminds me of the breakup with my ex-fiancee.
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The first thing that comes to mind is This Is Why People SUCK.
That's just me, all my poems have fucked up titles.
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