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Chances



Tranquility seizes the moment
Difficulties of yesterday
Are now washed away
Joy fills my heart
As a new day begins
Dreams may or may not come true
Yet , one thing I know
Is that I have another chance

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  • Mansoor
    June 13, 2007
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    thanks for reading the poetry i wrote.. yeah i realise that, ill correct it very soon..


  • freespirit51
    June 8, 2007

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    AWESOME!!! You have done a terrific job my dear friend. Your words are simple but meaningful. Congratulations on the silver it is well deserved.

  • cirque du soleil
    June 7, 2007
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    a well deserved silver trophy....
    i love the first three lines.
    congrrats!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    June 6, 2007
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    your poem

    delights my heart. I hope you win the contest.
    Smile,
    Judy


  • Lady Altheia
    June 6, 2007

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    Every day is a new chance. Tomorrow is a new day fresh and with no mistakes in it. Congrats on your silver trophy.

  • Deepredvelvet
    June 6, 2007
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    Very inspiring and a wonderful way to look at each day that faces us once again........


  • suseann
    June 6, 2007

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    Great work in describing the image message. And it a lovely well versed piece deserving of the silver.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 6, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful write, it's just a picture perfect

    I know why you won this shiny cup my friend
    Beautiful piece of poetry here...
    XXJeannette


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 6, 2007
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    Thanks so much for your beautiful entry.
    Gaylene

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