Unbreakable; Broke.
Untouchable; Touched.
And we see through that charade.
Parading in the moonlight,
Embraced by the sky.
Smooth, liquid love
Simmer.
Tingle and eyes flutter
Glassy, sheen,
Hands ensnared
Distilled water...
Simmer.
Cross your heart, close your eyes
Lay gently down your indifference
Sprawled cool, night air
Laugh,
Simmer.
Smile, pretend, shiver,
Float away,
At ease, at peace,
Summer.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Envious
Your still my favorite writter. You have a way of speaking your feelings threw your poetry very well and I love being able to read them, thank you for the read.
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A Ms Liquid original; what a joy. And just when I had decided that Ms Liquid must have dried up, probably due the ravages of a prolonged and savage drought. I find myself looking at ‘Summer’ with a promise of more, further down the page. There is a quality about your poetry that spins my head with answers to questions that have only speculation as a basis. It’s as if every word has been lifted to the page from deep within, after a can opener has been run across your body. I feel great for the read and guilty for, in part being responsibly for all the scars. ------ Thank you; (offers band-aids).
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I loved this one. It's really rhythmic and flows well. It's not too long but it still gets the ideas out there in a non-schalant way(however you spell that)I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. -paint
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