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Disgusting

When you think betrayal
Let it be forever.
Burning flame,
The essence of distaste stings.
Bring me to my knees,
And piece together infidelity.
No longer indifferent,
But whole and translucent
Disperse the chain reaction,
Let It Happen.
See what becomes of remembrance then,
Watch it dissipate,
Slowly dripping from your mouth,
Puddling at my feet.
Securing your redemption;
Your forgiveness.
Be merciful, oh lord,
Play me like a broken record,
And please, by all means, hate It.
Lessen your superiority,
Watch me fall, catch me.
Indefinitely. 

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  • wattle silver member
    June 6, 2007

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    Oh wow Ms Liquid. ‘Disgusting’ is more of you than any 'Summer' could ever hope to offer. It passes out hot spots cut from the surface, only to have them melt in the mind for by-passers frozen with neglect. I’m expecting more now, I’m waiting with eyes open staring at my blank screen. ------- Thank you. (Hope all is well in the land of the other long white cloud).