The mighty alpha Sol who brings us light Rises
He illuminates our life and everything but the deepest caves
He shows us the playful fawn who can run and play all day
He shows us the wolf pack who looks out for each-other
Sol shows us the fox sly and cunning but wise and fun loving
Soon the sun sleeps and Luna takes over her light soft and cool
She shows us the stars that hold our lives in their depths
Luna is our alpha female while sol sleeps she cares for us
She gives cover for the animals who come at night
Their feet softly pit-patting on the ground
Their wings making a gentle swishing upon the sweet air currants
But either day or night we see many things but we might misunderstand
In day we see the forest gentle and cool
In night we may see a haunted horrible place
In day we see the ocean soft and vast
In night we might think of the dangers and nothing else
But at any time either under rule of Sol or Luna remember
Don't challenge Sol with a look for he will win
Never mistake Luna's soft light for an evil presence for she trys to help
but always ask our alphas for help and guidance when needed
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is beautifuly desqripted i love it its of so true i love it and you did a great job i really like the passage "Don't challenge Sol with a look for he will win" it adds humor to a already good poem and when you can do that you know your good


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nice poem realy discribes a wolf pack



