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To Lord of all

The Lord of all for us on earth,
I pray and pray to You today.
For You're the one, the God of birth,
the Lord of all for us on earth.

This reckless soul oft longs for peace
which You alone can grant and give
till clamors  end and sorrows cease.
This reckless soul oft longs for peace
and rid false pride and sins. Lord fleece
my soul  so I can live  and live.
This reckless soul oft longs for peace
which You alone can grant and give.

With earnest pleas, I  seek Your grace,
to grant me  peace and give sweet dough
to all who throng this transient place.
I bend my knees so meek and low
and pray and pray to You today.


         

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  • Mercury Rising
    August 17, 2007

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    A very heart-felt and humble prayer that was penned with a lot of feeling. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David


  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    A lovely prayer. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling. Beautiful words of supplication. Your faith shines through in this piece. Thank you for sharing this prayer with us.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 7, 2007
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    I seek Your grace,
    to grant me peace and give sweet dough
    to all who throng this transient place.
    I bend my knees so meek and low
    and pray and pray to You today.



    This is very heartfelt poetry in the words of prayer..I loved it and convey my thanks for your a deep entry in my contest...