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This Is How I Fall Apart

Follow along the dotted lines
(You're only selling your soul- don't worry)
I swear it will only hurt a bit that way
We've all got this path carved out for us
With signs and lamps to guide our way

But what happens to those who stray from that path?
(You know, the ones that crash and burn?)

I will get my revenge on you, I swear
I'll see you crawl and grovel before me
(Before I admit you were right)
You can't hold me trapped any longer, it seems
(But I can)
I'm not blind anymore

I know I'm not sick- I'm just slipping
(But we know you are)
There's no such thing as a broken heart
(No, it's shattered)

This is how I fall apart
Under skies of white and blue
This is how I fall apart
And pretend I don't love you

(But we know anyways)

I begin to drown myself in a lake of frozen dreams
(Anything is better than spending another night with you)
This is how you tear me apart
Along those pre-determined lines

This is how I fall apart....

Author notes

Yeah... this is a little too in-depth to explain which parts pertain to which people... Just know that if you're a part of my life, you're probably in there. Kind of an angel-devil thing, combining both the good and the bad people in my life.

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    September 6, 2007

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    No this has just the right amount of depth in it. I love it so much. God bless you in all that you do.

    Tabitha

  • armorforchris
    August 16, 2007
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    i really like this alot...
    it blows my poems out of the water lol

    ~Chris


  • crimsondew
    June 5, 2007
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    It is very full of feelings.. Enjoyed it..