I don't want to dream alone anymore
you've opened my eyes
and electronic whispers
channel our secrets
These words mean something
can you read between the lines?
do you wait for me
like I wait for you?
And sometimes these electronic whispers
are the only things that keep me going
and I look forward to hearing them
sending your voice to me
the words escape
they echo and resonate
I'm not sure what this is
but we're going on
I want this to be more
but you're already my secret
Daddy would never approve
why do you have to be so easy to talk to?
These whispers just aren't enough anymore
What am I to you?
Am I just your naive friend?
you-you are almost my everything.
Author notes
you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray
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This a very touching poem about love. I surley believe there is definately passion and emotion bottled up. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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The longing and desperation are quite powerful in this piece. The universal need for attention, direction, and companionship seem to be expressed with finite clarity.
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