Holding hands and a kiss goodnite.
Hugs and whispers I have all let go.
These memories of "US" I hold onto so tight.
No more flowers and early morning wake up calls.
No I love you's and see you soon's.
I told you I would never fall in love
You said that you would have to live with that.
But I lied b-cuz you made me fall,
and when it was over I fit the ground.
My heart ripped from my chest and cut apart.
The words I Love You planted in my mind.
But you didnt love me, and I couldnt open my eyes to see.
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I dont believe in love.
what you think?
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Try to use proper grammar (ie "because" instead of "b-cuz" or however you spelled it). You can still write poetry in your own style without spelling like that; it's the way you tell a story in poetry that constitutes a style. Words do count for a lot, but when you use them, there's no excuse not to write out "because."
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WOW Tia that's really good I like it
Ur friend Amanda X -
don't use b-cuz in work...not if you want to be taken seriously...it is spelled 'because'...use it next time. use apostrophes with the word didn't...it looks a lot better
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Thanxz for that,
Thats just the way I write and if you dont like it I'm sorry. -
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she can do what she wants...and she wanted to do the "b-cuz" b-cuz she wanted to...do you have a problem with that? (good poem by the way)
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