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_+_ Secret Passageway Through A Pill _+_

It's 2:30
I can't
Even force myself to sleep
My body
Is rejecting every trial
That I attempt
To find the far away place
In my mind
Where I am at peace
And I can sleep
It seems to be locked away
Somewhere
Oh--
I wish I could find it

Maybe the answer
Is in front of my face
And I've simply been blinded
By the weights on my eyelids
How can I be tired
But cannot sleep?
It doesn't seems possible
But it is
And nothing natural can cure
This case of insomnia

However
I hold pill
That is a secret passageway
To the place
I yearn to go to
My sanctuary
Where it is safe to sleep

Author notes

Maybe I should just take it..Hmmmm
Written August 6th, 2003

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  • miss-conduct
    October 3, 2005
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    Happiness is only a pill away..thats my motto...lol.


  • teardrop gold member
    August 6, 2003
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    Ah, the good ole sleeping pills, yea, I take them as well when needed........another good write.

    TD


  • Scarlett silver member
    August 6, 2003
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    It's a small blue pill...I think it's called Simply Sleep? LOL I can't remember these things...

    !~*YS4e*~!
    Scarlett


  • CL the Bombay
    August 6, 2003
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    sleeping pills
    mild sedatives

    what is that pill
    redbluegreenpurple
    time for you to knock out

    nocturnal wonderlands
    and i can truly envision those weights on your eyelids
    like a tom and jerry cartoon-heh heh
    sleep well friend...
    -chiante-