They say love, is a river
that flows to stormy seas
They say love,is a hunger
and endless aching need
I say love, a flower
and you its only seed
Just remember in the winter
far beneath the freezing snow.
Lies your seed and with suns love
becomes my all year rose
Author notes
This is dedicated to an all poetry member who I call squirrel. he has a beautiful garden. He made me take better care of my own plants and I have a orange and yellow pettled rose and I named it after him. And I hope he likes my written garden of love.
My poem also shows dedication to protecting delicate flowers in harsh winter seasons and commitment of taking care of nature.
A contest entry
- ~~~Dedications~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended June 7, 2007, 23 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Beautiful words of love...lovely...I love the garden so connecting love with a seed planted to grow...was just beautiful within my mind..thanks for sharing
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Thanks for entering and good luck! hugs n kisses preets :F:F:F
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This is rather well written. Enjoyed it..
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