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Gather

 

D U S T

        sooner or later you will ask

        millions of square miles of it - a hundred
rippling oceans, each ripple a dull gleam of G R A Y

drab...       the non-colours shimmering
            
                                         Vast seas

of dust with dark islands bearing
great corpse trees, which are gray again...

and there, somewhere in the direction he walks

will be the fox,

    the implacable fox
        the fox that knows he is COMING


wait for me on the shore of that
time, enter with me the shared silence, for I
cannot abide the harshness of car horns or
dead dogs hanging from beams, I will not wear
shadows in my eyes or masks, help
me enter that place where we go, knowing
it waits for us, waits with words


a sparrow-hawk glides overhead
     looking for home  

         I have wasted my life

                       in endless 
                       figure-eights 

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a vacuum waiting to be

unsealed 
        dust of the ages rising and spelling

out the same 
story, a thousand years later, he digs them up –
the green metallic S H A R D S, leftovers of trees

straightening pictures on the
walls of strange rooms, time
is a matter of no concern
at all
   all the mislaid faces
        the world emptied
        the world upon whose hide
he walks under a philistine sun the
colour of rain & dust - only
living because it is a habit as the wind
moves restlessly, telling its tale to no one

the words at the end of the

                        world are
the words the man breathes

               the one
he cannot tell the one
his words
about one human heart about
          the W O R D S at the end of the
                                    world







Gather
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  • zt
    August 30, 2007
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    There was a line from the movie Field of Dreams: "If you build it, they will come." I think that you took this even further. "If you build it, it will fall into decay and a thousand years from now they will come to dig it up." I must say that this poem stretches the mind...


  • quietly burning
    June 10, 2007
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    question .. how do i bookmark ?


    ok .. under view options


  • The Bear
    June 8, 2007
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  • cvillelisa
    June 8, 2007

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    Wow. What a kind of "hovering over the earth before there was any poems" kind of poem. Reminds me a bit of Gary Snyder - very spiritual to me.

    And it has a fox in it. I like foxes.

    Thanks so much for experimenting - I think it is very beautiful.

    Lisa


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    June 6, 2007

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    In the end we all turn gray, we all return to the dust we came from. It is what we do in the in between that counts. You paint a beautiful picture in melancholy shades and the truest colors of life. I applaud such clever form, and rythem. You are art ripened to perfect fruition. Bravo sister mine.

    Blessed be,
    Billie Jean~serenity~


  • quietly burning
    June 6, 2007

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    all things, all places, all words, all experiences, all perceptions, all realities "gather" .. into dust ?

    there's very very VERY few writers that could write something so all encompassing and compelling as this.

    Coincidence that u are pic'd there with a fox i think not. text presentation as well is brilliant


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    "I will not wear
    shadows in my eyes or masks, help
    me enter that place where we go, knowing
    it waits for us, waits with words"

    Sighhh...It's always worth waiting for yours, Sweetie...Good luck in the contest, my dear Friend... Wanda


  • ArtFullyMe silver member
    June 5, 2007
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    wonderful...

  • Rowan gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    ..this is such an interesting write, to be read a few times.
    I loved the form, the different font, the entire feel to it.
    Excellent work, so very intriguing, different, and fresh.

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