You paint a rainbow of emotion inside me
That i cannot comprehend
I cant say that i love you
The words just aren't there
Bringing light to my days
Shining stars to my nights
My thoughts are derailed
On the one premise
That i might be able to see you
Living life for the moment
Playing it all by ear
Your voice, it sounds so sweet
Like candy from the store
Not knowing where to start
Not knowing where to stop
My heart flutters on the breeze
At the slightest of whims
With the greatest of ease
This feeling, inside me
Finally found my love
I'm finally free
No longer, torn in two
I've learned about my life
By living through you
A contest entry
- True Love by rahdeath.
550 points, ended June 24, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
comments from the peanut gallery
Comments
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awww wow lovely write, you done good with this one
much emotion portrayed, always makes for the best writes
Tasha L
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AWWWWWWWWW
This was in deed a beautiful piece.
GAwddd so much emotion, powerfully writen.
You did a great job this one so far i love the best.
Thanks for sharing it friend
best wishes with it
Tory
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Aww...how sweet! I love it, I really do. Two Thumbs Up!
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Liked the flow, the brevity of the lines and the tale you relate through these words. A happy ending too. Not sure if you want the other I's capitalized in the poem, as the ones at the beginning of the lines are.
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