The sun that strikes your face DP
the wind that tousles your hair
how I would love to be these
to touch and caress you
to hold you close like I once did,
these are the things that occupy my dreams...
Forever bold the wellness of you I know NH
Sense we met that day under the blue stars which
reflect off the green grass at our feet.
All those times we met together by the cherry tree.
Just to hold hands and laugh
And chitter chatter about the days to come.
I held your hand DP
and laughed at your jokes
I did what u wanted,
I love u
I need u
we laughed
and we cried
but always u held me
and helped me go on
never did u give up on me.
I … did not mistake that fire that burned NH
there in your green eyes.
I, did not mistake the passion beginning
To burn the deep of us, in you, in me
I love you too.
Out of you in to you
I felt right, next to you entangled.
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Comments
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Beautiful. There is a great sense of unity between you both as you write together. Your words and vocabulary flow really nicely together - this piece is a stunning example of a true team effort

well done to both!
ELW

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touching
this is so lovely you two write well together....i feel the warmth of love pouring through your words...well written ....hope u two write again together...peace katie
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Welcome to All Poetry !
A very nice collab write. I really enjoyed reading this. Lovely imagery penned in your words.
Thanks so much for sharing. Keep writing, reading and commenting.
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