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your heart within

i see the heart you hold deep
within and i am so happy you have
come to be my man
i see the heart in your soul
you have the heart of gold unlike any
i have held not many have put
me under their spell but; as you
can tell i am i am left without
doubt that i have found my
my calling out of my own hell;
god has gave me an angel to guide me through life’s
ups and downs; yes you will always be the one
who set my heart abound; lifted me up when
i was so far down
that be the heart i have found you hold with in
your love has come for us to over come its
leaps and bounds so let’s make our stand
as one my true love that i hold within my hands
for you are my true man…

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  • robert bolin
    June 6, 2007
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    very powerful words

    And stern emotions lela your friend rob.


  • dustookie2
    June 5, 2007

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    ah love is in the air here...your words flow with ease from the page and you guide the reader through this journey...fueling sweet emotions of new love am sure there will be many who will relate to this feeling of love the newness the thrill that makes your heart beat a little faster the giggles of nerves as the emotions of the heart take hold...beautifully penned hope he hears your words and feels the smile within your heart.