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You sent us back in body parts

I've got a new beginning
Threatening to break through
& MY mind won't let me think
Head-to-Head

I'm dying

Dismember me
Cut up these times
We shared
I won't cry
[I SWEAR]
I won't cry

I've got a punch [In your favor]
Labeled with your name
& a slap [I'm not able]
To bring it to your face

Don't stare;They always say
But I can't look away
Like a wreck
[Waiting to happen]
You can't stay in place

Rubbing my eyes
A smoking glaze
[What did you give me?]
Just a drop
A pill
A toast to the worst
Slip back the cup
& drown in the feeling
Resurface
[NO, never]
Heavy breathing
[Not dying]
Blurry Vision
[Still living]
Weak limbs
[Never dying]
Falling over
[Suffocation]

I've been poisoned
By this dream
[A smirk]
clears its place
Upon my face
& I'll never die
I'll stay alive
To haunt you
Everyday
Every night
In your wake
Until YOU die

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  • Cube
    June 5, 2007

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    Very well done. I like this and I like the slight DP formatting as well, adds more to it. Great work and good luck.