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hopeless love

i close my eyes and listen to my heart beat
i can feel my love for you from head to my feet
im not reaular im not your normal kind of guy
im not that special im not rich and i cant fly
i dont dress the way you and your friends do
im not stuck up or fit in to a group the way you do
im just me thats all im ever gonna be
whats on the out side is what you see
your dont see the person inside
you look at how nice they dress or how nice there ride
i wish you see me for who i am
i love you but u dont give a damn

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  • XBeatifullyBrokenX
    November 17, 2007
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    I love this its very good
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    I like the last two lines the most