In a Realm where the elves can thrive,
One man is trying to deprive
The elves of all things good and sweet
That lone man doesn't want defeat!
Every elf will join along,
Passing time with old and new songs
The battle plans are now complete
That lone man doesn't want defeat!
The elves will go seek far and wide
Calling their brethren to their side
The elves will travel so discreet
That lone man doesn't want defeat!
In a Realm where the elves can thrive
That lone man doesn't want defeat!
Author notes
Kyrielle Sonnet. first try at a sonnet...
Please tell me what you think
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You have done well with this your first sonnet, as for a title what is wrong with the one you've got? Val
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great rhyming!! the repeat of the 4th line is very effective. interesting... i hate making up titles as well... you might want to name it something like 'lone defeat' (lame ) or "Elves' Realm" (lamer! ) the rhyming isn't forced or anything, it happens to me a lot -- i'm not a very good rhymer. ^^
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I like it, though a title escapes me as well. I hate making titles sometimes...Anyway, this was good. Interesting concept.
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hmmmm, you know i like this but i can't think of a title for it, i wish you luck with that, keep it flowing
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Good write here
A great little sonnet and you will come up with a title for sure -
great write i really liked... i would have name it The lone man or defeat... great write tho!!!
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